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Poison- a twisted fairytale

Post by ky on Sun Jan 03, 2016 3:20 am

Prologue


30 years ago, fairytale land was a peaceful place. Every character had it's own place in it's own story. There was nothing anyone would want to complain about. Everyone was happy being surrounded by their friends and family.



until one day.



Fairytale land came under attack. Stories were erased and characters cruelly killed. From that day on, everything in Fairytale land was never the same. Every month a character was doomed to die.

A young girl was also snatched.

And only returned 10 years later to be different. She had lost her charm and sparkle. She was no longer able to be in her fairytale. She was cast out to dwell on her 10 years gone. In the end, it drove her mad and led her to something bigger.



i am that girl. My name is Tanya, and im 15.

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Post by ky on Sun Jan 03, 2016 3:22 am

1. Dreams.


Suddenly she was straddling him, a knife pressed firmly against his throat. She let out a dry, harsh laugh and continued to stare strait at him.

"This is how your life ends, if you don't start mine." she spat, venom dripping from her poison laced lips.

"What if i don't want to let yours start?" The dark figure winced as she pushed the knife in harder.

"Then i'll have to kill you."

The figure simply laughed "What happened to the sparky blonde we snatched 10 years ago? She wouldn't hurt a fly."

"I was four. You pretty much destroyed my life." Her eyes faded as she remembered.

"You were.... adorable, Blondie."

"Don't. Call me Blondie" she hissed, slicing the knife across his right cheek. "I really advise you to let me go."

"Never. You belong here with me, in our pretty little worl-"

"The place i never wanted to be. You forced me to do those things. Gang running, drug smugging, and even worse. You better be telling me your last wish."



"To Get you pinned up against the wall and to shoot you in the he-"

Smiling, she took one look at his pale face, and slit the knife across his throat.

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Post by Hazza on Sun Jan 03, 2016 12:03 pm

This is really good. You should definitely write more.

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Post by Rydel. on Sun Jan 03, 2016 3:09 pm

This is amazing, continue!

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Post by ky on Sun Jan 03, 2016 4:10 pm

thanks guys! this means a lot, y'know. writing is the only thing i'm skilled at, and to get nice comments like this it means a lot Very Happy Embarassed

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Post by Anika on Sun Jan 03, 2016 5:37 pm

Brilliant so far! More please!
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Post by ky on Sun Jan 03, 2016 5:56 pm

thanks Smile

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Post by Hazza on Sat May 14, 2016 5:31 pm

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